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article contains three parts:
Step
One: Brainstorming
Scholarship essays vary dramatically
in subject. However, most of them require a recounting
of personal experience. These tips will be more helpful
for writing personal essays, like for the National
Merit Scholarship, than for writing academic essays.
The most important aspect of your scholarship
essay is the subject matter. You should expect to
devote about 1-2 weeks simply to brainstorming ideas.
To begin brainstorming a subject idea consider the
following points. From brainstorming, you may find
a subject you had not considered at first.
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What
are your major accomplishments, and why do you
consider them accomplishments? Do not limit
yourself to accomplishments you have been formally
recognized for since the most interesting essays
often are based on accomplishments that may
have been trite at the time but become crucial
when placed in the context of your life. This
is especially true if the scholarship committee
receives a list of your credentials anyway.
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Does
any attribute, quality, or skill distinguish
you from everyone else? How did you develop
this attribute?
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Consider
your favorite books, movies, works of art, etc.
Have these influenced your life in a meaningful
way? Why are they your favorites?
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What
was the most difficult time in your life, and
why? How did your perspective on life change
as a result of the difficulty?
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Have
you ever struggled mightily for something and
succeeded? What made you successful?
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Have
you ever struggled mightily for something and
failed? How did you respond?
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Of
everything in the world, what would you most
like to be doing right now? Where would you
most like to be? Who, of everyone living and
dead, would you most like to be with? These
questions should help you realize what you love
most.
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Have
you experienced a moment of epiphany, as if
your eyes were opened to something you were
previously blind to?
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What
is your strongest, most unwavering personality
trait? Do you maintain strong beliefs or adhere
to a philosophy? How would your friends characterize
you? What would they write about if they were
writing your scholarship essay for you?
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What
have you done outside of the classroom that
demonstrates qualities sought after by universities?
Of these, which means the most to you?
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What
are your most important extracurricular or community
activities? What made you join these activities?
What made you continue to contribute to them?
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What
are your dreams of the future? When you look
back on your life in thirty years, what would
it take for you to consider your life successful?
What people, things, and accomplishments do
you need? How does this particular scholarship
fit into your plans for the future?
If these questions cannot cure your
writer's block, consider the following exercises:
1. Ask for Help from Parents,
Friends, Colleagues, etc.
If you cannot characterize yourself and your personality
traits do not automatically leap to mind, ask your
friends to write a list of your five most salient
personality traits. Ask your friends why they chose
the ones they did. If an image of your personality
begins to emerge, consider life experiences that
could illustrate these particular traits.
2. Consider your Childhood
While scholarship and aid officers are not interested
in reading about your childhood and are more interested
in the last 2-4 years of your life, you might consider
events of your childhood that inspired the interests
you have today. Interests that began in childhood
may be the most defining parts of your life, even
if you recently lost interest. For instance, if
you experienced extreme poverty, the death of a
loved one, immigration, etc., you might want to
incorporate this into your scholarship essay. Analyze
the reasons for your interests and how they were
shaped from your upbringing.
3. Consider your Role Models
Many applicants do not have role models and were
never greatly influenced by just one or two people.
However, for those of you who have role models and
actually aspire to become like certain people, you
may want to incorporate a discussion of that person
and the traits you admired into your scholarship
or financial aid application essay.
4. Read Sample Scholarship Essays and Admissions
Essays
Before writing a poem, you would certainly read
past poets. Before writing a book of philosophy,
you would consider past philosophers. In the same
way, we recommend reading sample application essays
to understand what topics other applicants chose.
EssayEdge maintains an archive of over 100 free
sample application essays. Click
here
to view sample essays that worked.
5. Goal Determination
Life is short. Why do you want spend 2-6 years of
your life at a particular college, graduate school,
or professional school? How is the degree necessary
to the fulfillment of your goals? When considering
goals, think broadly. Few people would be satisfied
with just a career. How else will your education
fit your needs and lead you to a fulfilling life?
If after reading this entire page you
do not have an idea for your essay, do not be surprised.
Coming up with an idea is difficult and requires time.
Actually consider the questions and exercises above.
Without a topic you feel passionate about, without
one that brings out the defining aspects of you personality,
you risk falling into the trap of sounding like the
90 percent of scholarship applicants who will write
boring essays. The only way to write a unique essay
is to have experiences that support whatever topic
you come up with. Whatever you do, don't let the essay
stress you out. Have fun with the brainstorming process.
You might discover something about yourself you never
consciously realized.
Good Luck!
Step
Two - Selecting an Essay Topic
Having completed step one, you should
now have a rough idea of the elements you wish to
include in your scholarship essay, including your
goals, important life experiences, research experience,
diversifying features, spectacular nonacademic accomplishments,
financial need, etc. You should also now have an idea
of what impression you want to make on the scholarship
committee.
You must now consider topics that will
allow you to synthesize your important personal characteristics
and experiences into a coherent whole. While most
scholarship essays allow great latitude in topic selection,
you must also be sure to answer the questions that
were asked of you. Leaving a lasting impression on
someone who reads 50 essays a day will not be easy,
but we have compiled some guidelines to help you get
started.
Consider the following questions before
proceeding:
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Have
you selected a topic that describes something
of personal importance in your life, with which
you can use vivid personal experiences
as supporting details?
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Is
your topic a gimmick? That is, do you plan to
write your essay in iambic pentameter or make
it funny. You should be very, very careful if
you are planning to do this. We recommend strongly
that you do not do this. Almost always, this
is done poorly and is not appreciated by the
scholarship committee unless a creative approach
is explicitly recommended. Nothing is worse
than not laughing or not being amused at something
that was written to be funny or amusing.
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Will
your topic only repeat information listed elsewhere
on your application? If so, pick a new topic.
Don?t mention GPAs or standardized test scores
in your essay if they are mentioned elsewhere.
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Can
you offer vivid supporting paragraphs to your
essay topic? If you cannot easily think of supporting
paragraphs with concrete examples, you should
probably choose a different essay topic.
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Can
you fully answer the question asked of you?
Can you address and elaborate on all points
within the specified word limit? If you plan
on writing about something technical, make sure
you truly can back up your interest in a topic
and are not merely throwing around big scientific
words. Unless you convince the reader that you
actually have the life experiences to back up
your interest in neurobiology, the reader will
assume you are trying to impress him/her with
shallow tactics. Also, be sure you can write
to the scholarship officers and that you are
not writing over their heads.
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Can
you keep the reader's interest from the first
word. The entire essay must be interesting,
considering scholarship officers will probably
only spend a few minutes reading each essay.
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Is
your topic overdone? To ascertain this, peruse
through old essays. EssayEdge's 100 free application
essays can help you do this. However, most topics
are overdone, and this is not a bad thing. A
unique or convincing answer to a classic topic
can pay off big.
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Will
your topic turnoff a large number of people?
If you write on how everyone should worship
your God, how wrong or right abortion is, or
how you think the Republican or Democratic Party
is evil, you will not win the scholarship or
aid award. The only thing worse than not writing
a memorable essay is writing an essay that will
be remembered negatively. Stay away from specific
religions, political doctrines, or controversial
opinions. You can still write an essay about
Nietzsche's influence on your life, but express
understanding that not all intelligent people
will agree with Nietzsche's claims. Emphasize
instead Nietzsche's influence on your
life, and not why you think he was wrong or
right in his claims.
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In
this vein, if you are presenting a topic that
is controversial, you must acknowledge counter
arguments without sounding arrogant.
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Will
a scholarship officer remember your topic after
a day of reading hundreds of essays? What will
the officer remember about your topic? What
will the officer remember about you? What will
your lasting impression be?
After evaluating your essay topics with
the above criteria and asking for the free opinions
of EssayEdge editors, of your teachers or colleagues,
and of your friends, you should have at least 1-2
interesting essay topics. Consider the following guidelines
below.
1. If you are planning on writing
an essay on how you survived poverty in Russia, your
mother's suicide, your father's kidnapping, or your
immigration to America from Asia, you should be careful
that your main goal is to address your own personal
qualities. Just because something sad or horrible
has happened to you does not mean that you should
win a scholarship. You don't want to be remembered
as the pathetic applicant. You want to be remembered
as the applicant who showed impressive qualities under
difficult circumstances. It is for this reason that
essays relating to this topic are considered among
the best. Unless you only use the horrible experience
as a lens with which to magnify your own personal
characteristics, you will not write a good essay.
2. "Diversity" is
the biggest buzzword of the 1990's. For this reason,
so many applicants are tempted to declare what makes
them diverse. However, simply saying you are a black,
lesbian female will not impress scholarship officers
in the least. While an essay incorporating this information
would probably be your best topic idea, you must finesse
the issue by addressing your own personal qualities
and how you overcame stigma, dealt with social ostracism,
etc. If you are a rich student from Beverly Hills
whose father is an engineer and whose mother is a
lawyer, but you happen to be a minority, an essay
about how you dealt with adversity would be unwise.
You must demonstrate vividly your personal qualities,
interests, motivations, etc. Address specifically
how your diversity will contribute to the realm of
campus opinion, the academic environment, and the
larger society.
3. Don't mention weaknesses
unless you absolutely need to explain them away. You
want to make a positive first impression, and telling
a scholarship officer anything about drinking, drugs,
partying, etc. undermines your goal. EssayEdge editors
have read more essays on ADD (Attention Deficit Disorder)
than we would ever have imagined. Why admit to weakness
when you can instead showcase your strengths?
4. Be honest, but not for honesty's
sake. Unless you are a truly excellent writer, your
best, most passionate writing will be about events
that actually occurred. While you might be tempted
to invent hardship, it is completely unnecessary.
Write an essay about your life that demonstrates your
personality.
Step
Three: Writing the Essay, Tips for Success
Even
seemingly boring topics can be made into exceptional
scholarship
essays with an innovative approach. In
writing the essay you must bear in mind your two goals:
to persuade the scholarship officer that you are extremely
worthy of receiving college assistance and to make the
officer aware that you are more than a GPA and a standardized
score, that you are a real-life, intriguing personality.
Unfortunately,
there is no surefire step-by-step method to writing
a good essay. EssayEdge editors at www.EssayEdge.com
will remake your essay into an awesome, memorable
masterpiece, but every topic requires a different
treatment since no two essays are alike. However,
we have compiled the following list of tips that you
should find useful while writing your scholarship
essay.
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Answer
the Question.
You can follow the next 12 steps, but if you
miss the question, you will not win
the scholarship.
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Be
Original. Even
seemingly boring essay topics can sound interesting
if creatively approached. If writing about a
gymnastics competition you trained for, do not
start your essay: "I worked long hours
for many weeks to train for XXX competition."
Consider an opening like, "Every morning
I awoke at 5:00 to sweat, tears, and blood as
I trained on the uneven bars hoping to bring
the state gymnastics trophy to my hometown."
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Be
Yourself.
The
scholarship committee wants
to learn about you and your writing ability.
Write about something meaningful and describe
your feelings, not necessarily your actions.
If you do this, your essay will be unique. Many
people travel to foreign countries or win competitions,
but your feelings during these events are unique
to you. Unless a philosophy or societal problem
has interested you intensely for years, stay
away from grand themes that you have little
personal experience with.
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Don't
"Thesaurize" your Composition.
For some reason, students continue to think
big words make good essays. Big words are fine,
but only if they are used in the appropriate
contexts with complex styles. Think Hemingway.
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Use
Imagery and Clear, Vivid Prose.
If you are not adept with imagery, you
can write an excellent essay without it, but
it's not easy. The application essay lends itself
to imagery since the entire essay requires your
experiences as supporting details. Appeal to
the five senses of the scholarship officers.
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Spend
the Most Time on your Introduction. Expect
scholarship
officers to spend 1-2 minutes reading your essay.
You must use your introduction to grab their interest
from the beginning. You might even consider completely
changing your introduction after writing your
body paragraphs.
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Don't
Summarize in your Introduction. Ask
yourself why a reader would want to read
your entire essay after reading your introduction.
If you summarize, the scholarship
officer need not read the rest of your essay.
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Create
Mystery or Intrigue in your Introduction.
It is not necessary or recommended that
your first sentence give away the subject
matter. Raise questions in the minds of
the scholarship
officers to force them to read on. Appeal
to their emotions to make them relate to
your subject matter.
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Body
Paragraphs Must Relate to Introduction. Your
introduction can be original, but cannot be
silly. The paragraphs that follow must relate
to your introduction.
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Use
Transition.
Applicants continue to ignore transition to
their own detriment. You must use transition
within paragraphs and especially between paragraphs
to preserve the logical flow of your essay.
Transition is not limited to phrases like "as
a result, in addition, while . . . , since .
. . , etc." but includes repeating key
words and progressing the idea. Transition provides
the intellectual architecture to argument building.
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Conclusions
are Crucial. The
conclusion is your last chance to persuade the
reader or impress upon them your qualifications.
In the conclusion, avoid summary since the essay
is rather short to begin with; the reader should
not need to be reminded of what you wrote 300
words before. Also do not use stock phrases
like "in conclusion, in summary, to conclude,
etc." You should consider the following
conclusions:
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Expand
upon the broader implications of your discussion.
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Consider
linking your conclusion to your introduction
to establish a sense of balance by reiterating
introductory phrases.
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Redefine
a term used previously in your body paragraphs.
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End
with a famous quote that is relevant to
your argument. Do not try to do this,
as this approach is overdone. This should
come naturally.
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Frame
your discussion within a larger context
or show that your topic has widespread appeal.
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Remember,
your essay need not be so tidy that you
can answer why your little sister died or
why people starve in Africa; you are not
writing a "sit-com," but should
forge some attempt at closure.
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Do
Something Else.
Spend a week or so away from your draft to decide
if you still consider your topic and approach
worthwhile.
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Give
your Draft to Others. Ask
editors to read with these questions in mind:
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Revise,
Revise, Revise.
You only are allowed so many words; use them
wisely. If H.D. Thoreau couldn't write a good
essay without revision, neither will you. Delete
anything in the essay that does not relate to
your main argument. Do you use transition? Are
your introduction and conclusions more than
summaries? Did you find every single grammatical
error?
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Allow
for the evolution of your main topic. Do
not assume your subject must remain fixed
and that you can only tweak sentences.
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Editing
takes time. Consider reordering your supporting
details, delete irrelevant sections, and
make clear the broader implications of your
experiences. Allow your more important arguments
to come to the foreground. Take points that
might only be implicit and make them explicit.
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